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Friday, March 29, 2019

My Writing using main ideas with supporting details

Our trip to Redwood. In the weekend my dad and I went to Redwood. I didn’t know where we were going. We went on three buses to get there. We got off the bus in Redwood. I didn’t know where we were. We had to walk down this road with no footpath. We were just walking on grass next to us was just trees and going past us was just cars. Finally we got to the street I found out we were going to Redwood Aquatics.
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